Thesis and 3 suptopic

Thesis: Pele is not just good at soccer but he is a very good person too. 3 Subtopic: _ Pele's Achievement _ Pele's influence ( In soccer) _ Pele's influence ( Outside soccer )

My rap song

Unbalanced many things are moving changing, changing Not what I'm doing I am like a bus driver steering around a corner waiting it's to change change the object's motion I wonder how force are made? and that question will never fade balance like positive Unbalance like negative and they will never make friend that is just what the nature lend Unbalanced never sit Unbalanced on will win balance always sit Balance no one wins Unbalanced,balanced never twins balanced, balanced waiting to hit balanced balanced into the mit

Response

When i read, i visualized of a book that had magic, or bad guy who always trick other people. just like The Emperor New Clothe. The criminal trick the king by pretend to make the magic shirt

12 facts about my topic

1. Pele is the youngest person who ever played in world cup
2. Pele is the youngest person who ever score in world cup
3.Pele is the youngest person who ever go to the final in the world cup
4. Pele is the youngest person who ever win the world cup.
5. Pele is the person who got the most soccer achievement
6.Pele scored three goals or more 129 times in his career
7.Pele is the first soccer player to achieve massive international acclaim
8.Pele real name is Edson Arantes do Nascimento
9. His shirt number is ten.
10.His trongest leg is right
11. He best at Dribbling, finishing
12. People called Pele "King of Soccer".

This is my prezi URL

http://prezi.com/c5fi3dtl0u5e/ela-presenta

my URL to my google doc

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dM4xHmrzRkgbAZnm0pJckfmRDqTeHnuLL864fMqO9OQ/edit

Entry 2

Improve: i will put more information and repetition more

  Han dynasty: Is the second great Chinese imperial dynasty.
  Died during the Great wall: Rock fall into them, no food, or fall
  Why did he built the great wall: To protect the Eastern end people and bandit.
  Which way does Quin Huangdi:  He sick to death
  Why did the Han Dynasty died:  Invaders from the northern part of China.,  Invaders from the northern part of China., The rich and poor gap, Social problems, Food shortages, Floods/droughts

Blog entry 1

1. What about Han dynasty.
2.Why did people died while built the Great Wall
3. Why did he built the Great Wall
4. Which way does Quin Huangdi died.
5.Why did the Han dynasty died, how?
6. why did Liu Bang's follower betrayed him

10. interesting facts about my topic

1. Pele score 1,281 goals.
2. Pele is the youngest player who ever join the World Cup
3.Pele is the youngest player who ever score in the World Cup
4. Pele is the youngest player who ever win the World Cup
5. Every team he go to, they almost always win the championship
6. Pele has black skin
7.became Brazil's minister of sports in 1995, serving until 1998.
8. He retired (1974) from the Santos team
9. His real name is Edson Arantes do Nascimento
10. Pele began playing at the age of 5 and joined the Santos team at 16

the attacking of Europe

Germany acts like acts like red devil.

But they still take up to the next level.

That’s why they have enough power.

Other countries are devoured.

Then they created new weapon.

So with that machine they started to threatened.

Europe is in a panic.

German’s supplies like going to a picnic.

Lusitania sinking, sinking,sinking.

So that starts the American thinking.

The answer  is join the war.

Lusitania get a big scar.

After Russia quit.

German wanted to alive.

So they need to fight England before the U.S arrived.

But it was to late.

The America has come too ate.

So the German leader quit his place.

The U.S has won the race.

The world war 1 finally ends.

Other country  makes friends.

The world has finally peace.

They can rest for 1 day at least.

In the Ottoman empire .

The war is like fire.

Gun, bullet, and dead body everywhere.

A bloody jacket to wear.

So that the story.

If you don’t like it so I’m sorry.

  

My delicous URL acount

http://www.delicious.com/maxpro1999

the place i find the information

it is in the pele book from the library and the soccer book from the library

Best topic

Why does soccer become the most famous sport??